Monday, April 21, 2025

Nature's Beauty - #WDYS #tanka #haiku #poem #poetry #poetrycommunity #nature @YvetteMCalleiro


Hello, beautiful readers! For this week's What Do You See? prompt, Sadje provided us with two images and invited us to let them inspire us to write a poem. I decided to write a tanka poem for the first image, which is a poem of five lines with a 5-7-5-7-7 syllabic pattern. The third line tends to be the pivot point and lends itself to both the first two lines and the last two lines. Then, I wrote a haiku for the second image. A haiku is three lines with a 5-7-5 syllabic pattern and usually focuses on nature.

(image credit; Alan Bajura @ Unsplash)

bright, crisp fall morning
white smoke lazily rises
water calmly drifts
until turbine pulls it in
soothing, trickling sense of peace


(image credit; Zach Heiberg @Unsplash)

focused perception
notice what is important
mother nature's gifts

Would you like to write a poem for one of these images? Join us here.

24 comments:

  1. Both poems are spot on Yvette. Loved the imagery of calm in the first one. Many thanks for joining in.
    Sadje

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  2. Nailed it!!! Beautifully done Yvette!!

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  3. Those are lovely! Well done, Yvette.

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    1. Thank you, Chris! I appreciate you stopping by. :-)

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  4. Poetry brings out such different responses to images! Isn't it amazing? I love how you've crafted a serene poem out of each image, Yvette.

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  5. Yvi, you tanka poem made me homesick for autumn! Your poems are just lovely!

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    1. Thank you, Colleen! I'm definitely not ready to skip summer. Lol! Thanks for stopping by. :-)

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  6. Both of these are just lovely, Yvette!
    Lauren 💕

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  7. I liked your take on both images, Yvette xo

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  8. Both poems beautifully rendered, Yvette.

    Punam

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  9. Brilliant, Yvette! Loved them both. :)

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