Thursday, April 3, 2025

Resting Days - #kimo #haiku #WDYS #FFFC #poem #poetry #poetrycommunity @YvetteMCalleiro



Hello, beautiful readers! Both Sadje's What Do You See? prompt and Melissa's Fandango Flash Fiction Challenge used pictures that were very similar in theme, so although I wrote a different poem for each, I decided to combine the prompts into one post. 

For the What Do You See? prompt, Sadje provides us with a picture of a man resting in a gorgeous tree. I chose to write a kimo for this poem. A kimo has three lines with a syllabic pattern of 10-7-6 and is focused on a frozen image.

In the Fandango Flash Fiction Challenge, Melissa provides a picture of a bear napping in nature. For this picture, I wrote a haiku with a 5-7-5 syllabic pattern.

(photo credit; Rob Mullaly @ Unsplash)

an escape from daily obligations
hidden where no one will look
embraced by nature's arms


(photo from Four Paws)

spring arrived too soon
cherry blossom's lullaby
lulls bear back to sleep


Would you like to write a poem for either (or both) of these prompts? Click the links below:


22 comments:

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    1. Thank you, Denise! I appreciate you visiting. :-)

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  2. Sleeping kids are always cute 😄

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  3. These are both wonderful, Yvette. Lovely and uplifting poems. Robbie

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  4. I love both the poems Yvette. In the short poems you’ve expressed a lot. Thanks for joining in.
    Sadje

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    1. Thank you, Sadje! I appreciate you stopping by. :-)

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  5. Ahh both a lovely ...💞Suzanne

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    1. Thank you, Suzanne! I appreciate you visiting. :-)

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  6. Beautiful take on the prompts, Yvette. - Eugi

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    1. Thank you, Eugi! I appreciate you stopping by. :-)

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  7. These are both wonderful, Yvette!! I love the man resting in the tree!

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  8. Both poems are delightful, Yvette, and I like how they have similar theme of “rest”.

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  9. Loved both but the sleeping bear one wins the prize. Very creative.

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    1. Thank you, Rall! I appreciate you stopping by. :-)

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  10. How lovely! I'd happily be in that tree right now!

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    1. You and me both, Keith! Thanks for stopping by. :-)

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