Hello, beautiful readers! For this week's What Do You See? prompt, Sadje provided us with two images and invited us to let them inspire us to write a poem. I decided to write a tanka poem for the first image, which is a poem of five lines with a 5-7-5-7-7 syllabic pattern. The third line tends to be the pivot point and lends itself to both the first two lines and the last two lines. Then, I wrote a haiku for the second image. A haiku is three lines with a 5-7-5 syllabic pattern and usually focuses on nature.
(image credit; Alan Bajura @ Unsplash)
bright, crisp fall morning
white smoke lazily rises
water calmly drifts
until turbine pulls it in
soothing, trickling sense of peace
(image credit; Zach Heiberg @Unsplash)
focused perception
notice what is important
mother nature's gifts
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Both poems are spot on Yvette. Loved the imagery of calm in the first one. Many thanks for joining in.
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DeleteExcellent take!
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DeleteI enjoyed both poems, Yvette!
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DeleteNailed it!!! Beautifully done Yvette!!
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DeleteThose are lovely! Well done, Yvette.
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DeletePoetry brings out such different responses to images! Isn't it amazing? I love how you've crafted a serene poem out of each image, Yvette.
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DeleteYvi, you tanka poem made me homesick for autumn! Your poems are just lovely!
ReplyDeleteThank you, Colleen! I'm definitely not ready to skip summer. Lol! Thanks for stopping by. :-)
DeleteBoth of these are just lovely, Yvette!
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Thank you, Lauren! I appreciate your visit. :-)
DeleteI liked your take on both images, Yvette xo
ReplyDeleteThank you, Denise! I appreciate your support. :-)
DeleteBoth calm and relaxing :)
ReplyDeleteThank you, Jules! I appreciate your support. :-)
DeleteBoth poems beautifully rendered, Yvette.
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Thank you, Punam! I appreciate your visit. :-)
DeleteBrilliant, Yvette! Loved them both. :)
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