Hello, beautiful readers! Today, I am combining two challenges. The first one comes from #TankaTuesday, where Selma invites us to write a syllabic poem focused on joy. Within the poem, we need to include a kigo (seasonal) word within the poem. I've bolded and italiziced my kigo words. I chose to write a Reverse Etheree, which is a poem with ten lines and a syllabication pattern of 10-9-8-7-6-5-4-3-2-1.
Coincidentally, Wea've Written Weekly also lent itself to the theme of joy. Dennis Johnstone invited us to write a poem that invites the reader toward a single abstract noun, in my case - joy. The poem cannot mention the noun until the final line. Each line should describe the noun, leading the reader to the revelation at the end.
(image courtesy of @JillWellington on Pixabay)
Choose Happiness
because hearts feel lighter with ev'ry smile
the spring's warmth chases away the cold
a baby's laughter ricochets
because dancing lifts the soul
trips create memories
kisses make hearts skip
and just because
it matters
embrace
joy
Would you like to write a poem for one of these two challenges? Click the link(s) below:
Superb crafting!
ReplyDeleteThank you, Reena! I appreciate your visit. :-)
DeleteDancing does lift the soul! Beautifully said. Xo
ReplyDeleteThank you, Denise! I appreciate you visiting. :-)
DeleteWhat an uplifting poem, Yvette! I could feel the joy!
ReplyDeleteThank you, Jan! I'm happy it shines through. Thanks for sharing! :-)
DeleteOh Yvette!, if only more people chose joy rather than chaos or negativity!
ReplyDeleteThe world would be a better place, for sure, Christine. Thanks for stopping by. :-)
DeleteBeautiful, Yvette!
ReplyDeleteThank you, Nolcha! I appreciate your visit. :-)
DeleteNicely done, Yvette!
ReplyDeleteThank you for commenting! :-)
DeleteBeautiful, happy and joyful 💜💜
ReplyDeleteThank you, Willow! I appreciate you visiting. :-)
DeleteClever combining the two prompts. Lovely poem.
ReplyDeleteThank you, Rall! I appreciate your visit. :-)
DeleteA lovely tanka tuesday poem, Yvi. Thanks for sharing! Hugs Harmony 🤗💖
ReplyDeleteThank you, Harmony! I appreciate you stopping by. :-)
DeleteI love the journey to joy! Of all the times in our history, this is the time to embrace joy! 💜
ReplyDeleteI agree, Colleen! We need to be intentional about feeling joy. Thanks for stopping by. :-)
DeleteBeautifully done, Yvette.
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Thank you, Jude! I appreciate your visit. :-)
Deleteit matters, it matters so much. And we must look for it with intention. And confidence that we will find it. This is just simply wonderful, dear Yvette. Joy. Yes, joy please. Thanks so much for sharing this loveliness. I send you a hug.
ReplyDeleteThank you, Selma! I receive your hug with open arms. I appreciate your kindness. :-)
DeleteRead it again... loved it twice. Thanks.
ReplyDeleteAw! You're so sweet, Selma! XOXO :-)
DeleteEveryday find and embrace joy!
ReplyDeleteYes! Thanks for visiting, Jules! :-)
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DeleteThis was definitely an exercise in joy! I think the baby's laughter at the center really brought it home for me.
ReplyDeleteA baby's laughter brightens everyone's mood. Thanks for sharing, Violet! :-)
DeleteI liked this form. It was interesting how you managed to depict joy in each line without spelling it out. You covered every aspect of joy : spring's warmth, a child's laughter, dancing, trips. Beautifully done, Yvette.
ReplyDeleteThank you, Smitha! I appreciate you visiting. :-)
Deletehi, Yvette❣️
ReplyDeleteJust wanna let you know that this week's W3, hosted by the wonderful Violet Lentz, is now live:
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Enjoy 😁
Much love,
David
SkepticsKaddish.com
Thank you, David! I will do my best to get to it this week. :-)
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