Saturday, May 10, 2025

My Diary's Demise - #XplorationChallenge #haibun #poem #poetry #poetrycommunity @YvetteMCalleiro


Hello, beautiful readers! For Reena's Xploration Challenge #380, she invites us to write a poem based on her prompt: Who will read my diary? She encourages us to focus on these five words: introspection, reflection, fear, inspiration, and legacy. I decided to write a haibun, which is a paragraph of prose and a haiku.

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My Diary's Demise 

I used to keep a diary when I was young. I wrote in it all the time, constantly reflecting on my thoughts, actions, and reactions. In fact, I had several diaries throughout the years. Each one had a lock on it, and I naively believed the lock could keep nosy intruders from reading my thoughts. During my adolescence, I learned how wrong I was. My most vulnerable feelings were exposed and violated, disintegrating the ability to trust the intruder for years to come. Drowning in despair, I tore apart all my diaries and never wrote in one again.

secretive refuge

camouflaged from nosy eyes

my true confidant


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12 comments:

  1. I can relate to every word of this. There is more rage than vulnerability, when people assume they have a right to invade another's sanctum sanctorum.

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    1. Exactly, Reena! I was furious and heartbroken at the time. Thanks for stopping by. :-)

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  2. I never kept a diary, but I would be very upset if someone invaded my privacy. - Eugi

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    1. It was very upsetting, Eugi! Thanks for visiting. :-)

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  3. Hi Yvette, I also had a diary for two years. I am sorry yours was violated, that isn't nice. Robbie

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  4. Not fun to have our private thoughts exposed, Yvette! I ended up burning my diaries years ago. It was supposed to release my past. Not sure it did and probably better those thoughts aren't recorded anymore.

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    1. I agree about not having those thoughts recorded, Denise! Thanks for sharing! :-)

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  5. Sorry your diary was violated Yvette.. it is difficult to trust others after that happens...Sally

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    1. Yes, it is, Sally. I still have difficulty letting people into my circle of trust. Thanks for stopping by. :-)

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  6. Reminds me of when I kept a diary as a pre-teen. It was supposed to be private, but my sister showed it to my mother, and then I proceeded to write the most obnoxious things in it!

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    1. Haha! Something similar happened to me, but I just tore them all up. Thanks for sharing, Susi! :-)

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