Wednesday, May 21, 2025

Choose Happiness #W3 #TankaTuesday #ReverseEtheree #poem #poetry #poetrycommunity @YvetteMCalleiro



Hello, beautiful readers! Today, I am combining two challenges. The first one comes from #TankaTuesday, where Selma invites us to write a syllabic poem focused on joy. Within the poem, we need to include a kigo (seasonal) word within the poem. I've bolded and italiziced my kigo words. I chose to write a Reverse Etheree, which is a poem with ten lines and a syllabication pattern of 10-9-8-7-6-5-4-3-2-1.

 Coincidentally, Wea've Written Weekly also lent itself to the theme of joy. Dennis Johnstone invited us to write a poem that invites the reader toward a single abstract noun, in my case - joy. The poem cannot mention the noun until the final line. Each line should describe the noun, leading the reader to the revelation at the end.


(image courtesy of @JillWellington on Pixabay)

Choose Happiness

because hearts feel lighter with ev'ry smile

the spring's warmth chases away the cold

a baby's laughter ricochets

because dancing lifts the soul

trips create memories

kisses make hearts skip

and just because

it matters

embrace

joy


Would you like to write a poem for one of these two challenges? Click the link(s) below:


36 comments:

  1. Dancing does lift the soul! Beautifully said. Xo

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    1. Thank you, Denise! I appreciate you visiting. :-)

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  2. What an uplifting poem, Yvette! I could feel the joy!

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    1. Thank you, Jan! I'm happy it shines through. Thanks for sharing! :-)

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  3. Oh Yvette!, if only more people chose joy rather than chaos or negativity!

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    1. The world would be a better place, for sure, Christine. Thanks for stopping by. :-)

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  4. Nicely done, Yvette!

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  5. Beautiful, happy and joyful 💜💜

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    1. Thank you, Willow! I appreciate you visiting. :-)

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  6. Clever combining the two prompts. Lovely poem.

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  7. A lovely tanka tuesday poem, Yvi. Thanks for sharing! Hugs Harmony 🤗💖

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    1. Thank you, Harmony! I appreciate you stopping by. :-)

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  8. I love the journey to joy! Of all the times in our history, this is the time to embrace joy! 💜

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    1. I agree, Colleen! We need to be intentional about feeling joy. Thanks for stopping by. :-)

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  9. Beautifully done, Yvette.
    |Jude|

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  10. it matters, it matters so much. And we must look for it with intention. And confidence that we will find it. This is just simply wonderful, dear Yvette. Joy. Yes, joy please. Thanks so much for sharing this loveliness. I send you a hug.

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    1. Thank you, Selma! I receive your hug with open arms. I appreciate your kindness. :-)

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  11. Read it again... loved it twice. Thanks.

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  12. Everyday find and embrace joy!

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  13. This was definitely an exercise in joy! I think the baby's laughter at the center really brought it home for me.

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    1. A baby's laughter brightens everyone's mood. Thanks for sharing, Violet! :-)

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  14. I liked this form. It was interesting how you managed to depict joy in each line without spelling it out. You covered every aspect of joy : spring's warmth, a child's laughter, dancing, trips. Beautifully done, Yvette.

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    1. Thank you, Smitha! I appreciate you visiting. :-)

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  15. hi, Yvette❣️

    Just wanna let you know that this week's W3, hosted by the wonderful Violet Lentz, is now live:

    W3

    Enjoy 😁

    Much love,
    David
    SkepticsKaddish.com

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    1. Thank you, David! I will do my best to get to it this week. :-)

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