Hello, beautiful readers! I am hosting over at #TankaTuesday this week, and I hope you'll join us to write poetry. This week, I've challenged everyone to write about a dream that has come true or one that fell apart. It's such a beautiful day outside my window, and I'm feeling optimistic, so I thought I'd write about a dream coming true.
For today's prompt, I've chosen to write a choka, which is an unrhymed poem that alternates five and seven-syllable lines and then ends with an extra seven-syllable line. It is also often followed with another short poem called a hanka. The hanka summarizes, supplements, or elaborates on the contents of the main poem. I've chosen to write a nine-line choka with a syllabic pattern of 5-7-5-7-5-7-5-7-7 followed by a tanka.
manifestation
you came to me in a dream
filled my soul with song
entered my life with a click
instant connection
easy, comfortable talks
laughter fills the air
magnetic relationship
dream became reality
winter dreams dormant
seeds buried deep carry hope
earth begins to thaw
spring awakens with whispers
beauty explodes all around
Would you like to write a poem for this prompt? Join us here.

What a beautiful love story!
ReplyDeleteThank you, Paula! I appreciate your visit. :-)
DeleteWhat a poetic love story, Yvette and the tanka is equally stunning. ❤️
ReplyDeleteThank you, Balroop! I appreciate you visiting. :-)
Deletelove the seasons of love....it is a beautiful form that sings like a song
ReplyDeleteThank you, Miss Pie! I appreciate your visit. :-)
DeleteThis is truly beautiful, Yvette.
ReplyDeleteThank you, Robbie! I'm happy you enjoyed it. Thanks for stopping by. :-)
DeleteLovely, Yvette.... "beauty explodes all around" YES! ❤️
ReplyDeleteThank you, Gwen! I appreciate your visit. :-)
DeleteHi Yvette, I wrote a choka, too! I loved yours which could easily go with the thought with which I wrote mine. Your tanka is especially beautiful.
ReplyDeleteI loved your choka, Smitha! Thanks for stopping by! :-)
DeleteLove can be so encouraging - may love continue to grow and bring comfort!
ReplyDeleteThank you, Jules! I appreciate your visit. :-)
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