Hello, beautiful readers! Painting has begun in my house. It's one step closer to having this renovation over, but there is still so much that needs to be done. I am managing my anxiety fairly well, given the circumstances. I am grateful for these poetry challenges because they are helping me focus on something other than the chaos in my house.
Today, I'm attempting to combine two challenges. The first comes from #TankaTuesday. Colleen introduced us to synesthesia, which is a literary device that intertwines sensory experiences. For example, you would describe a color by using a word that describes a smell or use an adjective for sound to describe a texture. I have bolded and italicized my synesthesia examples.
The other challenge is the Creative Perspective Challenge, where Denise provides us with the picture below and encourages us to let it inspire us. I've chosen to write a tanka poem for today.
removes man's harm to planet
joyful, gentle winds
vast, fresh, blueberry oceans
reset provides a fresh start
Would you like to write a poem for either of these prompts? Click the links below:
You did a great job combining two prompts, Yvette. I agree about how a futuristic dream can possibly remove man's harm to the planet. Hopefully we've learned something here.
ReplyDeleteThank you, Jan! I don't know that our leaders have learned anything yet, but the harsh lessons keep coming. I appreciate you stopping by. :-)
DeleteI love blueberry oceans, Yvette. It's hopeful like the thought we will be kinder to our planet in the future. Thank you for joining in, love the take on what might be to come xo
ReplyDeleteThank you, Denise! I appreciate your visit. :-)
DeleteFresh blueberry oceans is a lovely sensory image in my mind, Yvi. 💜
ReplyDeleteThank you, Colleen! I'm happy you like it. I appreciate you visiting. :-)
DeleteWouldn't that be a lovely thing? A dip in a blueberry ocean would be refreshing.
ReplyDeleteAnd delicious! Lol! Thanks for visiting, Marsha! :-)
DeleteFuturistic perspectives lend new meaning to the present.
ReplyDeleteI appreciate you visiting, Reena! :-)
DeleteHow lovely, Yvette. Blueberry oceans, a superb visual. Futuristic dreams to help our planet should be the utmost priority for humankind.
ReplyDeleteI agree, Eugi! Thanks for visiting! :-)
DeleteI love 'blueberry ocean' - such an innovative thought! What a brilliant take, Yvette!
ReplyDeleteThank you, Balroop! I appreciate your visit. :-)
DeleteAdore this futuristic post. All is lovely with our world and its people. Thanks for sending this thought out into the universe. We will be ok now. Bless you.
ReplyDeleteThank you, Selma! I appreciate your visit. :-)
DeleteAlways a pleasure to read your words. Phenomenal! Xo, Selma
DeleteGreat job, especially the combination of prompts 🙌
ReplyDeleteThank you, Ange! I appreciate you visiting. :-)
DeleteBlueberry oceans... lovely.
ReplyDeleteBest to getting the home all settled. This week our new back door and downstairs windos go in!
Yay! I'm happy you are getting those installed. I'm still dealing with the renovations. Deep breath... Thanks for stopping by, Jules! :-)
DeleteOh how lovely to swim in a blueberry ocean, I love this futuristic image Yvette
ReplyDelete💞Suzanne
Thank you, Suzanne! I appreciate your visit. :-)
DeleteThis is beautiful, Yvette, and I love the idea of blueberry oceans.
ReplyDeleteLauren 💙
Thank you, Lauren! I appreciate your visit. :-)
DeleteThis poem is a delight. I love your descriptions. Renovations are tough. I had them two years running and it was a killer. Robbie
ReplyDeleteTwo years?! I have been going through it for two months, and I'm ready to pull my hair out. Lol! I hope it all came out as nice as you wanted it. Thanks for visiting, Robbie! :-)
DeleteA wonderful collaboration and response poem!
ReplyDeleteI hope your renovation goes well - and quickly!
Thank you, Nolcha! I appreciate your visit and well wishes. :-)
DeleteI love blueberry oceans.
ReplyDeleteThank you, Melissa! I appreciate you visiting. :-)
DeleteYou nailed both challenges, Yvette. "Blueberry oceans" was perfect. Well done!
ReplyDeleteThank you, Diana! I appreciate your visit.
DeleteYvette M Calleiro :-)
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