Tuesday, July 22, 2025

Treehouse Camping - #TankaTuesday #tankaprose #poem #poetry #poetrycommunity @YvetteMCalleiro


Hello, beautiful readers! For today's #TankaTuesday Poetry Challenge, Selma invited us to explore the photography of Paul Szlosek. I encourage you to click on his name and check out his photos. They are fantastic! I chose the photo below and decided to write a tanka prose, which is a paragraph of prose and a tanka.

(image courtesy of Paul Szlosek)

Treehouse Camping

When I was little, my dad was stationed in Vicksburg, Mississippi, for three years. We lived in a brick house on Melrose Road. Behind our house, our yard rapidly descended toward a creek that would rise every time a bad storm came through. On that incline was a huge tree, so my dad built my sister and me a treehouse across its several large trunks. As far as we were concerned, it was a mansion, and all our friends loved to visit. I miss those days where a simple treehouse was enough to satisfy the soul.

treehouse summer nights
sleeping bags up high in tree
crickets serenade
lantern glow illuminates
imagination set free


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21 comments:

  1. Oh my, Dad is a real hero. This is a wonderful thing to do for children. Happy memories. Beautiful lines, dear Yvette. Stay sweet.

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  2. Ahh, what a sweet memory and beautiful poem. ❤️ Heartwarming, Yvette.

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  3. Ah, your poem reflects such lovely memories, Yvette.

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    1. Thank you, Eugi! They were happy times indeed. Thanks for stopping by. :-)

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  4. What a lucky girl you were. Tree house, probably lots of private club meetings, sleepovers. singing bugs. What could be better?

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    1. Those were great years, Marsha. I definitely enjoyed them. I appreciate you visiting. :-)

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  5. This sounds so fun! I can imagine sleeping under the stars in a treehouse. What a lovely memory, Yvi. 💜

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    1. Thank you, Colleen! It was a lot of fun. I appreciate you visiting. :-)

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  6. A tree house sounds marvellous.

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  7. Ah, that took me back to my own very joyous experiences, so wonderful on both counts your lines evoking my childhood. ❤️

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    1. Thank you, Paul! I'm glad I brought back happy memories. Thanks for visiting! :-)

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  8. Oh yes, simpler times then when playing in the mud was the best thing to happen on a good summer day :)

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    1. Exactly! I miss that simplicity. Thanks for stopping by, Jules! :-)

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  9. I especially enjoy your tanka, the last two lines of it the most.❤️

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