Tuesday, February 18, 2025

Haiku - #72JapaneseMicroSeasons #haiku #poem #poetry #poetrycommunity #writer #writingcommunity @YvetteMCalleiro


Hello, beautiful readers! This week, Colleen Chesebro introduces us the Japanese micro-season of Uo kōri o izuru, which represents the seasons of "fish emerge from the ice." 

I decided to write a haiku, which is three lines with a 5-7-5 syllabic pattern. It also must include a kigo word (representing the season).

(image created by Microsoft Copilot)

spring's warming sun rays
winter's grip begins to thaw
fish emerge from ice

Would you like to write a poem for this season? Join us here.

10 comments:

  1. Must be nice to see the fish break through the ice after a cold winter. Nice poem, Yvette!

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    1. I am more than happy to watch it from my screen. Brrr! Lol! Thanks for visiting, Denise! :-)

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  2. It’s good to know the fish are breaking through the ice somewhere. Thanks so much, Yvi. 🎣

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  3. Let's hope winter's grip begins to thaw soon!

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    1. That's the hope, Heather! Thanks for stopping by. :-)

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  4. A beautiful haiku full of spring hope!

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  5. Beautifully written haiku, Yvette. I am wishing for an early spring but doubt it will happen. However, we have tiny buds on our trees. - Eugi

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    1. That's a start, Eugi! I hope you get your wish. Thanks for stopping by. :-)

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