Wednesday, August 2, 2023

#TankaTuesday Weekly #Poetry Challenge - #Syllabic #poem #poetrycommunity #synonyms #haiku #summerfun #lakes @ColleenChesebro @YvetteMCalleiro


Hello, beautiful readers! For this week's #TankaTuesday Weekly Poetry Challenge, Colleen Chesebro has asked us to write a poem using synonyms of words wave and flow. As a beach lover, my mind immediately goes to water. 

So, I decided to write a haiku. A haiku is a 3-line poem with a 5-7-5 syllabic pattern. The middle line is supposed to be a pivot where the first two lines can create one image and the last two lines can create a different image. It should also connect with nature or seasons in some way. Recently, we learned that a haiku isn't really about the syllables but about the rhythm. I tried to incorporate that as well. You can learn more about it here.

(courtesy of @Sammy-R at Pixabay)

boats create large swells
summer disturbs peaceful lake
fall brings calm currents

My life is about to get even busier. Next week starts back-to-school preparation. I'll be working four of the five days to teach beginning teachers and begin setting up my classroom, plus doing my part-time job on the side. The following week will be mandatory teacher planning days and the first two days of school. 

The beginning of the school year is always an energy drain for me. Don't get me wrong. I love what I do and am excited to meet my new students, but the body isn't as young as it used to be. Getting back into a school routine takes an adjustment. 

I still plan to be around, write poetry, participate in the RRBC Writer's Conference and Book Expo, and support my fellow authors as much as I can, but if I'm a little quieter, you'll know why. 😊

Do you want to try to create a poem with synonyms for the words wave and flow? Join us here.

35 comments:

  1. All the makings of an authentic haiku. I love it.

    And I bet the summer break feels short right about now. Think about all you did—lots!! That was not short. And I’m sure the memories will take you to where you’re needed and where you’re IN THE ZONE!! You’re amazing already. I bless you. Xoxo Selma.

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    1. You are so right, my dear Selma! This summer was amazing and created so many wonderful memories that I hold dear to my heart. Thank you for your kind words. :-)

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  2. Loud powerboats are not my favorites. Sounds like you'll be looking for opportunities for peace and calm once the school year gets rolling.

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    1. Yes, I will, Lisa! I tend to find them in meditations and nature. Luckily, I make sure that both are plentiful in my life. Thank you for visiting! :-)

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  3. A lovely haiku, Yvette. I imagine the lake-life enjoys a return to calm when fall descends and school starts again. It sounds like a very busy time for you. Get lots of rest and take deep breaths. I'm wishing you a wonderful year.

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    1. Thank you, Diana! My parents live on a lake that allows gas-powered boats. They are always happen when "summer" ends and the kids are back in school. Lol! Thank you for the well wishes. As sad as I am to see summer vacation go, I am excited about the new school year. :-)

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  4. Lovely Haiku, good luck with going back to school 💜

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    1. Thank you, Willow! I appreciate the well wishes. :-)

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  5. Enjoy the roller coaster :)

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    1. That it is! Lol! And while I do prefer to keep my feet firmly planted on the ground, I enjoy that my school days are not monotonous. Thanks for visiting! :-)

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  6. Hey Yvette. I loved your haiku, change is almost always inevitable. I wonder what RRBC Writer's Conference and Book Expo are.
    We will miss you when you're busy.
    -judeitakali-

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    1. It's a wonderful conference where authors and readers come together to celebrating writing and continue to perfect their writing skills. You can learn more about it here: https://ravereviewsbookclub.wordpress.com/rrbc-writers-conference-book-expo-wcbe/. Thanks for asking, Jude! :-)

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  7. You are one busy lady, Yvette. I can only imagine the energy it requires to teach young minds, but what a wonderful way to spend your life. I love the haiku! It is descriptive and very befitting.

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    1. Thank you, Jan! I truly love what I do, even though it can be quite draining sometime. Luckily, summer has served its purpose, and I feel ready to do it all over again with a new group of learners. Thanks for visiting! :-)

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  8. I love the feel of a calm fall. Beautiful haiku, Yvette. Xo

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    1. We don't experience the Fall seasons down here in South Florida, but when my son and I went to Vermont last Fall, I truly enjoyed that calm feeling. I hope to carry it with me into this new season. Thanks for visiting, Denise! :-)

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  9. And summer is so fleeting for you, isn't it? Time moves so quickly. Thank goodness the teachers have you as an example. 🙏🏻 This was a lovely haiku.

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    1. Summer is the season that moves the fastest for me. Lol! But I enjoy it to its fullest. Thank you for the kind words, Colleen. I truly appreciate them. :-)

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  10. Thank you for your visit. I enjoyed your haiku. I am pleased you still enjoy teaching. It is a gift. ...as you say ,draining however. The grinding bureaucracy, not the kids, take its toll....RALL

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    1. You are right, Rall! When I'm with my students, I'm in my happy place. It's the outside interference that drain teachers. Thanks for visiting! :-)

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  11. I love your haiku, Yvette. All the best with the beginning of school. I remember those busy days. Hugs. 🤗

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    1. Thanks for the well wishes! I appreciate them, Gwen. :-)

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  12. I get to work before most buses are on the roads, so I rarely have to deal with that. I know it gets chaotic and congested during those times, though. Thanks for sharing, Jules! :-)

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  13. Lovely haiku, Yvette! I am looking forward to the fall temps. Sending you lots of energy for the start of the school year. 🤗

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    1. Thank you, HJ! I will take all the energy you send. The first week is the most draining. Lol! :-)

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  14. Hi Yvette, I didn’t know you had a second job. Or did you mean writing. A beautiful haiku.

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    1. I have a part-time online job to make ends meet. It's mostly data entry with some phone calls every now and then, and I get to set my own hours, which is nice. It's one of the many reasons I don't have much time to read and write, but bills need to be paid. With a son in his last year of high school, there are a lot of expenses. I'm blessed that this job is available and is so flexible. Thanks for stopping by, Robbie! :-)

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  15. Beautiful haiku, Yvette, and you are going to get busier. Don't forget to breathe, and we'll see you when you have time. But take care of you. ❤️

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    1. Thank you, Lauren! I've restarted my emotional frequency technique tapping sessions to help with self-care. And mindful breathing is so important! I appreciate the advice. :-)

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  16. Wonderful Haiku, Yvette. I think nature takes a breather in the Fall, unlike yourself. :) All the best with the new school year.

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    1. You are so right, Mark! Lol! I will do my best to take breathers every moment I get. Thanks for visiting! :-)

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