Hello, beautiful readers! As #TankaTuesday has retired, I am searching for other ways to tap into creating poetry. Today, I've decided to try David's Wea've Written Weekly Prompt. His weekly challenge visits different themes and styles of poetry. This week, the goal is to write an ode, which is a poem that celebrates or glorifies something.
I've chosen to write an ode to the beach because, as most of you already know, the beach is my happy place. I've chosen to write a free verse poem, which has no syllabic pattern.
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An Ode to the Beach
You are a wonder,
Always yet never the same,
Embracing the life within and around you,
Healing the body, mind, and soul of those who visit,
Calming, nourishing, refreshing.
You are perfectly imperfect,
Tumultuous at times with your rage and angst,
Releasing that which does not serve you,
Finding your way back to peace,
Your ebb and flow creating a serene rhythm,
Strengthening, transforming, dancing.
You are resilient,
Indifferent to the intrusion of your barriers,
Trod upon, sullied, and disrespected,Forgiving those who do not value you,
Wiping away their memory with laps upon the shore,
Embracing, accepting, forgiving.
You are my hero.
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Wonderful ode, you captured all the moods and characteristics of the beach.
ReplyDeleteThank you, Heather! I'm happy you liked it. Thanks for visiting! :-)
DeleteWonderful ode to the beach, Yvette. The beach and oceans are all those things as well as a great teacher. I'm glad you found another challenge and I look forward to reading your poetry.
ReplyDeleteThank you, Diana! I appreciate you visiting and sharing your thoughts with me. :-)
DeleteNicely done. Very evocative
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Delete(Jules) I enjoy my beach time. Though I don't have one all that close - I have to rely on the little creek that borders my yard. Always changing and rearranging itself. Change being the only constant :)
ReplyDeleteAny body of water works, Jules! I'm happy you at least have that. Thanks for sharing. :-)
DeleteA beach is one of my favorite places, too. Great choice!
ReplyDeleteThank you, Sarah! I'm happy you liked it. Thanks for visiting. :-)
DeleteVery good! I love that last stanza - encourages me.
ReplyDeleteSorry to comment as Anonymous by mistake. That last comment was from me.
DeleteLovely to read your Ode to the Beach, it is my go to place, you have captured its wonderful qualities 💞Suzanne
ReplyDeleteThank you, Suzanne! It's my go to place as well! Thanks for sharing. :-)
DeleteYvette, your ode to the beach beautifully captures its power to heal and transform. I love how you express its strength and resilience, and the sense of peace it brings—such a moving tribute!
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Thank you, David! I'm so happy you like it. It's my first time writing an ode, so I appreciate the challenge. :-)
DeleteAww most beautiful. I should have written about the sea too. It is my happy place too. I go to her to douse my troubles and she smoothes me out. Like she does rocks and pieces of glass. Just like I recited in that Sarah Connor poem on IG. It spoke to me. Just like this lovely poem. Stellar, Yve. You’re so good with Odes. 😀 🎉 xoxo, Selma.
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