This week's 24 Seasons Syllabic Poetry Challenge brings in a new season called Seimei, or Clear and Bright. Because it's already Friday, and I still have a busy weekend ahead of me, I decided to write a haiku (three lines with a 5-7-5 syllabic pattern. My kigo phrase is bolded and italicized.
sea's fragrance permeates air
worries disappear
Good luck to those of you participating in NaPoWritMo (National Poetry Writing Month)! One of these years, I'm going to participate. :-)
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Lovely photos and poems, I am so pleased you all had such a wonderful time 💜💜
ReplyDeleteThanks, Willow! I'm happy you stopped by. :-)
DeleteAbsolutely, Colleen! It was a wonderful trip that rejuvenated my spirit. Thanks for visiting! :-)
ReplyDeleteYvette thank you for sharing those wonderful family vacation photos. So nice you all were able to get a break from the usual.
ReplyDeleteIt was an enjoyable break, for sure. Thanks for visiting, Lisa! :-)
Deletegreat fun! lovely photos and poem :)
ReplyDeleteThank you, Lady Lee! I appreciate you stopping by. :-)
DeleteIt looks like you had a fantastic and much needed break, Yvette. Beautiful photos and a beautiful haiku.
ReplyDeleteThank you, Diana! We had a wonderful time. :-)
DeleteHi Yvette, what a wonderful holiday. Your haiku is gorgeous and fitting. Robbie
ReplyDeleteThank you, Robbie! I'm happy you like it. :-)
DeleteWhat fun, my friend. The sea definitely tosses hair, but I never would have thought to include that in a poem. Yet, it makes it so real! Fabulous.
ReplyDeleteThank you so much! My hair was tossing all over the place on the islands. The breeze is so beautiful. I appreciate you stopping by. :-)
Delete(Jules) So glad you had a wonderful time!! (((Hugs)))
ReplyDeleteThank you, Jules! I appreciate you stopping by. :-)
DeleteIt looks like you two had a blast!! And a lovely haiku to boot!
ReplyDeleteSincerely,
David
SkepticsKaddish.com
Thanks, David! We really did. Thanks for visiting! :-)
DeleteEchoing all the comments....I am so pleased you had such a great holiday.I am doing napowrimo and enjoying it. I do it every year but I think I'd rather be in the Caribbean:)....Rall
ReplyDeleteHow about being in the Caribbean AND writing poetry? Now, that sounds heavenly! Thanks for visiting, Rall! :-)
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