Hello, beautiful readers! I hope you are well. If you live in the Northern hemisphere and are enduring the freezing weather, I hope you are able to stay warm and safe. We've had a few windy weeks which has kept me from my beloved beach, but my sister and I have found a few moments to go bike riding. Last weekend, we complete a 16-mile ride, partly against the wind, which was a challenge but I loved it. Later this afternoon, we are hoping to visit another park for some more bike riding.
For this week's 24 Seasons Syllabic Poetry Challenge, Colleen Chesebro has asked us to choose a poetic form and kigo word of our choice. Yesterday, my sister, who sponsors a high school spoken word poetry club, shared with me a video of her team's group piece. Its focus on was partly on homelessness. As I sat down to work on the poem for this challenge, my thoughts turned to those with no shelter to protect them from the elements.
I enjoyed writing a haibun last week, so I decided to write another one this week. I chose to use winter wind for my kigo.
Hi Yvette, homelessness during the cold winter months is particularly sad. A beautiful haibun. Robbie
ReplyDeleteThank you, Robbie! I truly hope they all find shelter during these months.
DeleteSorry the comment about the vets is from me. ~Colleen~
ReplyDeleteThank you, Colleen! It is shameful that our country doesn't take care of them. They should have the best of care and the best services available. It breaks my heart that they are forgotten.
ReplyDeleteYvette, every time I think of a homeless veteran (or homeless anyone!) it saddens me. In FL he has a chance of not freezing to death. Here, it happens :(
ReplyDeleteYou are right, Lisa! We dip into the 40s some nights, but it's nothing like up north. I know they try to round up the homeless and take them to shelters when it gets cold. I hope they do the same elsewhere. Thanks for visiting and sharing your thoughts. :-)
DeleteA very touching story in your haibun!
ReplyDeleteThank you so much! I appreciate you visiting! :-)
DeleteHomelessness is the saddest aspect of modern life and how apathetic are the concerned authorities! So heartbreaking!
ReplyDeleteI agree, Balroop! It's a sad blemish on our humanity.
DeleteIt's a shame the way we treat our veterans. Even the ones who manage to live somewhat normal lives are haunted by what they saw and did during their service. They need our help and support. Well said.
ReplyDeleteI agree, Lisa! They deserve so much more than they are given when they return from their service. Thanks for commenting! :-)
DeleteYvette, your haibun captures the harsh reality of the unseen and unhoused. The contrast between the veteran's sacrifice for the country and his current plight really touches me. Are you familiar with the "Invisible People" YouTube channel?
ReplyDeleteMuch love,
David
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Yes, David, I am. It absolutely breaks my heart. Thank you for sharing it so others can learn more about the unhoused. :-)
DeleteA touching poem, Yvette, and such a terrible tragedy that the US doesn't take care of our struggling veterans. It's heart-breaking.
ReplyDeleteIt truly is. Thank you for visiting today, Diana! :-)
DeleteThis is beautifully written Yvette 🩷
ReplyDeleteThank you, Ange! I appreciate you stopping by. :-)
DeleteThat was me Ange (AJ) 😃
ReplyDelete(Jules) It is quite a shame how homeless are treated. There are many organizations here who work together to get them off the streets especially when it is too cold. I wrote a piece Jan 21 '23 called 'Shaken Not Stirred' about an imagined homeless person... though it could seem very real.
ReplyDeleteI know that in some states schools opperate all year round. But in those states that don't it has been suggested that the building be used for homeless shelter when not in use. I'm not sure of the logistics... but I think if people worked together ... *sigh*
Yes, it would take multiple agencies working together and the government being willing to spend money. Given that veterans give their all to the government, it's the least they can do to help them. Thanks for sharing, Jules! :-)
DeleteThis brings tears to my eyes. It is just so wrong.
ReplyDeleteI agree, Denise! Thanks for stopping by. :-)
DeleteOh, that is heartbreaking. Yesterday, 1,000 volunteers in our county went out to count the # of people sleeping on the streets that night.
ReplyDeleteHow wonderful that so many people were involved in caring for others? That warms my heart, Luanne! Thank you for sharing that with me. :-)
DeleteBeautifully written, Yvette, but your words brought tears to my eyes. It just doesn't make sense how this could even happen. xo
ReplyDeleteAw, sorry for the tears, Lauren! I can't make sense of it, either. :'(
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