Hello, beautiful readers! For this week's #TankaTuesday Weekly Poetry Challenge, Colleen Chesebro has given us a painting to inspire us. It is the Portrait of Lady Agnew of Lochnaw by John Singer Sargent.Her eyes drew me in first. She appears to be looking right into your soul. But it was the tilt in her lips, and perhaps a look from her left eye, that inspired my poem.
I chose to write a freestyle poem and added a Shadorma at the end. A Shadorma has six lines with a 3-5-3-3-7-5 syllabic pattern with no set rhyme scheme. It also has a title.
Misperceptions
Because I am wealthy, you think me
Privileged
Traipsing carefree with nary a worry
Adorned with silks and satins
Enjoying teas and cakes and laughter
Among friends
Because I am beautiful, you think me
Elegant
Skin as fair as snow
Hair as rich as a starless night
Head held regally so all can enjoy my allure
Because I am a woman, you think me
Delicate
As fragile as porcelain
Needing to be coddled and cared for
Too naïve to make choices for myself
Dependent
Because you think
And do not know
You continue to placate me
Providing me a life of ease and comfort
Of wealth and power
But I am ready to take the reins.
~o~
Deliverance
posh lifestyle
high society
he owns her
controls her
arsenic is all it takes
heiress gains freedom
What do you see when you look at this picture? If you want to try your hand at writing a poem about it, click here.
Does she look as sinister to you as she did to me? I'd love to hear from you below.