Monday, February 9, 2026

One with Nature - #W3 #erasurepoem #poem #poetry #poetrycommunity @YvetteMCalleiro


Hello, beautiful readers! I hope you are all well. I spent the weekend surrounded by different friend groups, celebrating life and companionship. And then I enjoyed a great Super Bowl game and halftime show. It was wonderful watching the Hispanic culture, my heritage, be celebrated in such a beautiful way. 

My mother is receiving excellent home health care. A nurse visits twice a day, and she has access to an online medical team at all hours. There is very little improvement, but healing takes time.

Today, I chose to participate in Wea've Written Weekly's prompt. Shaun invites us to write an erasure poem. I chose to use my favorite poem, Two Roads in a Yellow Wood by Robert Frost to create my poem. I have always loved this poem, and I'm happy with the new meaning I've created with my erasure poem.

Here is the original poem:

(image taken from Poetry Foundation)

Here is my erasure:


And finally, here is my new poem, a haiku:

in a yellow wood
one traveler leads with a sigh
a wood and I - one


Would you like to write an erasure poem? Join us here.

18 comments:

  1. A great haiku Yvette! 👏 A haiku is a good aim for erasure poetry as it makes you focus very specifically an the few words that you need and have available.

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    1. Thank you, Shaun! I enjoyed making this one. Thanks for the prompt! :-)

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  2. Great idea to do a haiku! 👏 Brava, Yvette!

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  3. It's Violet, Yvette. I'm on my phone. I loved what you did here☺️

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    1. Thank you, Violet! I appreciate you stopping by. :-)

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  4. I love what you created from Robert Frost's words.

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    1. Thank you, Heather! I appreciate you stopping by. :-)

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  5. Great take, Yvette. What a beautiful haiku you extracted from a long poem.

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  6. Yvette, “one traveler leads with a sigh” really gets me — it feels so quietly human. I love how much you hold in just a few words.

    Much love,
    David
    SkepticsKaddish.com

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    1. Aw, thank you, David! I appreciate your kind words. :-)

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