Monday, November 10, 2025

A Moonlit Veil - #TankaTuesday #tanka #poem #poetry #poetrycommunity @YvetteMCalleiro

 



Hello, beautiful readers! I tried every day last week to find a moment to write poetry, but every day got away from me. By the time I was able to rest, it was past 8 pm, and my brain was too exhausted to function. I missed a lot of great prompts last week, but I wanted to make the effort to at least write about the prompt I created for the #TankaTuesday prompt last Tuesday. The prompt asked writers to focus on the word veil. So, I wrote a tanka.

(image courtesy of @Iffany on Pixabay)

souls from yesteryear
cross beyond the moonlit veil
a balm for loved ones
visits comfort grieving hearts
if only for brief moments


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17 comments:

  1. I wonder that it's because they are brief they are more treasured and sought? I like this reflection on the veil.

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  2. Beautiful words and sentiment that resonates, Yvette.
    Lauren 🩷

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  3. Yvette, your Tanka creates vivid imagery. It fits perfectly with the image. Comforting is such a warm way to describe those visits. 👏♥️

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  4. Any sign from beyond the veil does bring some comfort, Yvette :) Beautifully said xo

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  5. Beautiful Tanka, Yvette. Any visit from loved ones gone,however fleeting it may be, is a gift.

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    1. Thank you, Smitha! I appreciate you stopping by. :-)

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  6. Hi Yvette, I wrote the above comment.

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  7. So lovely, and comforting thoughts, Yvette. 💫

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  8. A lovely interpretation of All Hallows Eve, Yvette, as a time of communion and comfort. Your poem is beautiful. I hope this week is a little less hectic. Hugs.

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  9. I like how different traditions respect those who have gone on...
    I can't say that I've ever really felt the presence of such... but maybe they were there just when I needed them :)

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    1. I love the different traditions as well, Jules! Thanks for stopping by. :-)

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