Hello, beautiful readers! For this week's #TankaTuesday Poetry Challenge, poet Willow Willers challenges us to use music or a song as inspiration. When I was younger, I was very much into music. I grew up in the late 70s, 80s, and 90s, and I absolutely loved the music of my generation. I knew all the lyrics and would sing along every time. I remember recording the music from the radio onto my cassette tapes and getting frustration when the radio station would cut into the song to plug in a promo for the sole purpose of ruining my recording. Ah, those were the days! 😂
Nowadays, music tends to be background noise for me. I still sing along to some songs, but for the most part, I am lost in my own thoughts while the radio plays in the car (the only place I really listen to music). When Willow gave us this prompt, one song immediately came to mind, and I knew I would write with that song in my heart.
When I got divorced in 2009, Black Eyed Peas released I Gotta Feeling. I was in a very low place in my life. I was dealing with Chronic Fatigue Syndrome and raising a three-year old as a single mom. This song came on the radio and filled me with happiness, energy, and hope. It became a mantra for me. I would sing every word in the car. Eventually, my son started singing the chorus with me, and it became our song. In fact, it's how he learned the days of the week. Lol! To this day, whenever the song comes on, he and I will sing it.
I chose to write a tanka, which is a poem with five lines in it. It has a syllabication pattern of 5-7-5-7-7, where the third line is the pivot line. Tanka poems are untitled.
stress overwhelms me
heaviness drains my essence
music changes mood
soul and sight focus on light
all's right with the world again
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Spectacular choice, yve. The rhythm in that song is perfect for moving. And your tanka feels light indeed.
ReplyDeleteI can imagine you and your little three year old singing too.
Thanks for sharing my sweet. Be well. Xo, selma
Thank you, Selma! That song definitely always makes me smile. I appreciate you visiting. :-)
DeleteFeels LIKE light indeed *
ReplyDeleteSelma
Wow, LIGHT in action! Your poem is perfect, Yvette. Love it! 🌞
ReplyDeleteThank you, Gwen! I appreciate you stopping by. :-)
DeleteI love your mantra song, Yvette and that your son learned to say the days of the week from it! The tanka was perfect for it :)
ReplyDeleteThanks, Denise! I have many wonderful memories with this son. I'm happy you enjoyed it. :-)
DeleteI remember good nights like that, back when I could stay awake past 11pm. Now is my time for different good nights. Still good though. It's all about perceptions and intentions. Great song and video.
ReplyDeleteI am with you on that, Peter! Before COVID, I could go dancing until the early hours of the morning. Since then, I'm finding that going to bed early feels really good. Lol! Thanks for visiting! :-)
DeleteIt's amazing how music is just part of us - that rhythm of our heart beats. I'm so glad you and your son had "your song" and that it lifted your spirits. A wise poem with some wonderful advice. <3
ReplyDeleteThank you, Diana! Rhythm has always stirred me, even if music tends to be in the background nowadays. I love dancing because the rhythm speaks to my soul and releases all stress. Thanks for sharing, Diana! :-)
DeleteI love the personal nature of your poetry.We learn little tidbits about your life e.g. the close relationship you have with your son. Your generosity and openness makes for very enjoyable poetry
ReplyDeleteThank you, Rall! Poetry, for me, has always had a vulnerability to it. It's a moment to connect with my soul. I appreciate your compliment. :-)
Delete(Jules) Let that light shine as an everlasting beacon of supreme hope! 💞
ReplyDeleteThank you, Jules! I appreciate your positivity. :-)
DeleteMusic can indeed be something to hang on to, give us courage and strength.
ReplyDeleteIt certainly can, Kerfe! Thanks for visiting. :-)
DeleteI love the musical inspiration, Yvi. It's help keep moving forward. xxx
ReplyDeleteAbsolutely, Colleen! Thanks for stopping by. :-)
DeleteA beautiful tanka, and such a sweet and touching backdrop to it..
ReplyDeleteThank you, Jude! :-)
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