Hello, beautiful readers! I hope you are enjoying the winter holidays. For this week's 24 Seasons Syllabic Poetry Challenge, Colleen Chesebro has asked us to write a series of three Abhanga poems with each stanza using a specific phrase:
#1 - Boxing Day
#2 - New Year's Eve
#3 - hot drinks
An Abhanga poem has four lines with a syllabic pattern of 6-6-6-4. The two inner lines rhyme, and the poem must have a title. It's pretty cold in South Florida right now (high 50s, low 60s), and while most of us don't have fireplaces, I know the warmth of a great campfire, so I captured that essence in my third stanza.
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This is lovely, Yvette! Especially that third stanza - just delightful!
ReplyDeleteMuch love,
David
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Thank you, David! I'm happy you liked it. :-)
DeleteSuch a cosy scenario!
ReplyDeleteI always think of cold winters as a time to cozy up with loved ones. Thanks for visiting! :-)
DeleteA trifecta of wise loveliness, Yvette. Best to You and Yours in 2024.
ReplyDeleteAw, thank you, Lisa! Happy new year to you and yours as well! :-)
DeleteEnjoyed all of these.....Rall
ReplyDeleteThank you, Rall! :-)
DeleteHappy New Year, Yvi! Your abhanga are fabulous. I love how the three stanzas rhyme. The flow is perfect! 💗
ReplyDeleteThank you, Colleen! Happy New Year! :-)
Delete(Jules) Lovely. No fire on a Cruise Ship! Just the fire of love in our hearts ;)
ReplyDeleteBest to you and yours in the new year!!
Enjoy your cruise, Jules! Happy new year! :-)
DeleteTruly lovely, Yvette. Happy New Year to you! ❤️
ReplyDeleteThank you, Gwen! Happy new year to you as well! :-)
DeleteAll are absolutely lovely 💜💜💜
ReplyDeleteThank you, Willow! :-)
DeleteBeautiful, Yvette. You made the form seem effortless. <3
ReplyDeleteAw, that's so kind of you to say, Diana! I'm glad it appears that way. Lol! Thanks for visiting! :-)
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