Even though it was my theme, it took me a while to sit down and allow the words to flow onto a page. Since the pandemic began, I've found myself on a journey of healing and growth. Part of that journey has been about shifting perspectives. For as long as I can remember, I've had a strong negative inner voice. I used to try to suppress and ignore her, which only made her stronger. So, now I listen and then offer myself a new way of seeing things. It isn't always easy, but I'm celebrating my successes. So, I chose to focus on the beginnings that come after the endings.
This week, I tried my hand at a choka poem. In her poetry cheat sheet, Colleen explains that a choka uses couplets of an alternating 5-7 syllabic pattern with the last two lines having seven syllables each. She also explains that they were followed by a shorter poem called a hanka. For my hanka, I've added a tanka poem. Enjoy! :-)
Mother
Nature sheds
old
skin and begins again
each
and every spring
after
sunset comes sunrise
new moons bring full moons
raging
fires foster growth
matter
finds a way
nothing
is gone forever
even
love will be reborn
how
do you see it?
perspective
is everything
one
must choose whether
to
focus on loss and grieve
or to celebrate the new
Love how this thoughtful poem wraps up so nicely with the final tanka. I'd be inclined to celebrate the new!
ReplyDeleteThank you for the compliment! That is my choice as well. :-)
DeleteThat was an awesome prompt, Yvette, and you'd never know by the quality of your poem that you struggled with it. It's beautiful. And I like the choka too - those extra lines are an indulgence. <3 <3 <3
ReplyDeleteThank you, Diana! I appreciate the compliment, and I'm so happy you enjoyed the prompt.
DeleteJust lovely, Yvette 💜
ReplyDeleteThank you so much! :-)
DeleteA wonderful tribute to the miracle of natural rejuvenation! Well done, Yvette.
ReplyDeleteThanks, Mark! I keep hearing the "Circle of Life" song in my head. Lol! :-)
DeleteThank you, Colleen! :-)
ReplyDeleteYvette, I really enjoyed the sentiment and the style. It flows delightfully and highlights the rebirth. Thank you.
ReplyDeleteI'm so happy you stopped by to share your thoughts. Thank you! :-)
DeleteBeautifully said about prespective, Yvette! Thank you for a great theme to work with this week xo
ReplyDeleteI'm so happy you enjoyed the theme, Denise! Thank you! :-)
DeleteHi Yvette, you did a great job with this new form.
ReplyDeleteThanks, Robbie! :-)
Deleteinteresting.... do you really think it's either-or, Yvette?
ReplyDeletemuch love,
David [ben Alexander]
Definitely not either-or, David. How can you have one without the other? But in the end, I want to focus my energy on the positive. :-)
DeleteLovely Yvette.. firstly thank you for the prompt.. it was an interesting challenge... and inner voices are difficult to silence as they are often underlined by people around us who echo their negativity.. a lovely Choka...♥
ReplyDeleteThank you! I am fortunate in having several stubborn, positive people who love me unconditionally and kept sharing their positive energy with me until I started seeing things through their mindsets. :-)
DeleteYes, look for renewal each and every day.
ReplyDeleteLook to smile, to be challenged (in a good way), and to continue to learn.
Thank you for the theme - Jules.
(JulesPaige from WP/Tanka Tuesday)
Thank you, Jules! I'm always focusing on the positive energy. I appreciate you stopping by and sharing yours. :-)
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