Hello, beautiful readers! It's been a while since I've been able to write poetry. I've missed you all. I've been prioritizing my health and trying to create a new routine for working out and going to sleep earlier than I have been, and it's cut into my poetry time. Eventually, I'll find a happy balance. This will be the only day I can write this week since I'm going to visit my parents and my son. So, I've decided to combine three poetry challenges.
The first is from #TankaTuesday, where Colleen invites us to use uncommon Autumn words from this site. I chose to use the word rudeneja, which means the way the world gently falls into autumn. It's meant to be an adjective, but I used it as a noun.
The second challenge is from Wea've Written Weekly (W3) where Reena invites us to write a poem that has both prose and poetry. She gave us two images to choose from, and the one I've chosen is what inspired my poem. Although I've written a haibun, it also counts as a Prosimentrum since the prose is more dominant (I think).
And the third challenge is Reena's Xploration Challenge #402 where she invites us to write about passages, doorways, thresholds, and transitions. With all that is happening right now, my muse went directly to the poem below.
The constitution was supposed to be the threshold, the minimum expected of every citizen, especially politicians who swear an oath to uphold all of it. They were expected to perform their duties lawfully and honorably as laid out in our treasured contract. So, why are so many choosing to turn a blind eye to their responsibilities? Are they so short-sighted that they prefer to relish their few moments of power instead of recognizing the dismantling and destruction of the very values that held our democracy together? Our democracy was never meant to be one-sided. It was a promise among many to hold our laws and our decency above all personal gains. It was built on collaboration and compromise. It was solidified and infused with the human spirit, compassion for the least fortunate, and justice for all through our amendments. It was not meant for one party or one person to pervert its words and use it as a weapon against other citizens. It was not meant for one party to create mayhem and use malice against the other party. It was not written to divide and conquer but to unite and uplift. Will it honestly take a nasty divorce for us to realize we lost our most precious treasure forever?
intended chaos
wishing for rudeneja
democratic peace
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Oh yes! We are all dreaming of the years when the felon wasn't here. This chaos can't last. It's going to implode before long.
ReplyDeleteOne can only hope, and when it does, I hope the damage is reparable. Thanks for visiting, Colleen! :-)
DeleteBrilliant mashup, Yvette! I love how you connected three different prompts.
ReplyDeleteThis is Reena Saxena.
DeleteThank you, Reena! I appreciate your visit. :-)
DeleteBrilliantly executed Yvette 🙌
ReplyDeleteThank you, Ange! I appreciate you visiting. :-)
DeleteWow, Yvette. Xo, Selma
ReplyDeleteThank you for visiting, Selma! :-)
DeleteYes. A hard hitting Prosimetrum! - murisopsis
ReplyDeleteThank you, Val! I appreciate you stopping by. :-)
Deletea lovely sentiment, well expressed and a new word for me in rudeneja, one that i always wanted a word for
ReplyDeleteThank you, Artie! I appreciate your visit. :-)
DeleteI think the government has 'gotten away' with doing things in this self-serving fashion so long- they cannot even comprehend- that we are actually catching on. We out number them so if and when we stand up- they will inevitably fall- the only question I have is how long is it going to take us to stand up in unison?
ReplyDeleteI agree, Violet. They are working really hard to keep us divided so that we do not put a stop to their unlawful ways. Thanks for visiting and sharing. :-)
DeleteWell said Yvette.
ReplyDeleteThank you, Kerfe! I appreciate your visit. :-)
DeleteYvette, your question about “a nasty divorce” really struck me — I feel that ache too.
ReplyDelete“Rudeneja” gives it a tender kind of hope, I think.
Much love,
David
SkepticsKaddish.com
Thank you, David. I appreciate your comment. :-)
DeleteYes, absolutely, waiting for peace to fall, beautiful.
ReplyDeleteThank you, Paul! I appreciate you stopping by. :-)
DeleteWell said, Yvette!
ReplyDeleteThank you, Denise! I appreciate your visit. :-)
Deletehi, Yvette❣️
ReplyDeleteThis note of mine is a bit delayed this week, but I just wanna let you know that our W3, hosted by our beloved Kerfe, is live:
W3
Much love,
David
SkepticsKaddish.com
Thank you, David! I've been sick all week, but I'll see if I can get to it this weekend. :-)
DeleteThe USA is bizarro to me at the moment! Good job on this piece, Yvette!
ReplyDeleteThank you, Susi! Bizarro is a great word for our country right now. Thanks for stopping by. :-)
Deletehi, Yvette❣️
ReplyDeleteJust wanna let you know that this week's W3, hosted by our beloved Sarah Whiley, is now live:
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Much love,
David
SkepticsKaddish.com
Thank you, David! I'll take a look at it now. :-)
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