Saturday, November 1, 2025

Autumn's Celebration - #TankaTuesday #Tan-Ku #poem #poetry #poetrycommunity @YvetteMCalleiro


Hello, beautiful readers! I cannot believe another week has already passed. I don't seem to have a moment to rest. I can finally say that my kitchen is finally done! A project that should have been completed in early June is finally complete. Now, I just have to deal with the nightmare of a contractor to finish the final paperwork and payment. I cannot wait until I never have to deal with them again.

For this week's #TankaTuesday Poetry Challenge, Melissa invites us to write a Tan-Ku, which is a poetry form written by two people where one person writes a tanka and the other responds with a haiku. The challenge is to write a Tan-Ku sequence. Melissa provided the first tanka, so I've added a haiku and then began the second set with a tanka. I've put Melissa's words in blue and my additions in black.

(courtesy of @StockSnap at Pixabay)

Autumn Celebrations

fireside marshmallows
melting onto graham crackers
season of the s'more
cheery trick-or-treaters
like king size candy bars

dance around fire pit
Halloween's moon opens gates
spirits cross the veil

crisp breeze blows through hair
a welcomed shift in weather
Gaia repaints leaves
vivid transient canvas
I love nature's masterpiece

blustery evening
leaves roll across the street
crinkling underfoot


Would you like to participate this week? Join us here.

10 comments:

  1. Oh this is so perfect for Halloween and now November. By the way, Yvi, I LOVE your challenge for this week. Very timely for the season. ๐Ÿงก

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    1. Aw, thank you, Colleen! I'm so happy to hear that. I'm looking forward to seeing what everyone comes up with. :-)

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  2. A contrast between Halloween as a fun celebration and the knowing of the thin place where souls cross over. I love how you did yours, each form, works well and flows beautifully.

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  3. "Gaia repaints leaves"--what a lovely thought.

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  4. A lovely post ๐Ÿ’œ๐Ÿ๐Ÿ‚๐Ÿ๐Ÿ‚๐Ÿ๐Ÿ‚๐Ÿ

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    1. Thank you, Willow! I appreciate you stopping by. :-)

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  5. I love that blend, Yvette! So happy to hear they are finally done. Enjoy your new remodel. Xo

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