We started state testing this week. As an empath, it's exhausting! I pick up on all the students' stress and anxiety. We have two more weeks of testing, so I've got to rebuild my reserves this weekend. You know what that means? Beach time! 😊
For this week's TankaTuesday 24 Seasons Syllabic Poetry Challenge, Colleen Chesebro challenged us to write a renga. A renga is a poetry written by two different poets, each contributing a part. The first poet writes the hokku (haiku), and the second poet writes his/her response (wakiku). The wakiku consists of two lines, each with seven syllables.
Colleen provided the first hokku and encouraged us to write the wakiku. She also asked that we provide the next hokku, and she (and you, if you so choose) will write the wakiku in the comments. As always, we need to include kigo words. They should be part of the hokku. I've bolded and italicized them.
the sounds of April showers
thunderous rumblings
crisp, fresh pages beckon me
travel to fantasy worlds
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beacon of wonder
April full moon captivates
good fortune awaits
Would you like to create a wakiku to my hokku? Share it with me in the comments!
If you feel inspired to write your own, join us here.
my wakiku to your hokku:
ReplyDeletedreams echo sage foretelling
his eyes meet mine on the train
Oh, that's beautiful, Lisa! Thanks for contributing those lines! :-)
DeleteYour wakiku to Colleen's hokku is beautiful, Yvette. And you inspired me with your challenge. Thanks for the fun! My wakiku:
ReplyDeletespring promises new blossoms
a dawn resplendent with hope
I love it, Diana! Your wakiku fits perfectly! Thanks for participating. :-)
DeleteHi, Yvi! I really enjoyed your renga. Here is my wakiku:
ReplyDeletethis moment—a reminder
of precious time spent with you
(I was thinking of your son going off to college). ❣️
Awww! I love it! The full moon is actually special to my son and me. Ever since he was little, I would always point out the full moon (la luna linda - the pretty moon in Spanish), and we would gaze upon it together. He and I recently took a moment to enjoy the most recent full moon together. So, your wakiku is a perfect connection! Thank you for writing it! :-)
DeleteNice wakiku, Yvette.
ReplyDeleteMy wakiku to your hokku :-
i wonder at May's silence
dark and gold in hushed night sky
Beautiful, Aishwarya! Thanks for stopping by and participating. :-)
DeleteLovely poetry Yvette! May I add my wakiku:
ReplyDeletedawn drapes fragrance of season
morning dew glistens brighter
That's such beautiful imagery, Balroop! Thank you for adding your wakiku! :-)
DeleteBeautiful poetry, Yvette. I hope Colleen does this again because it was so enjoyable.
ReplyDeleteI agree, Eugi! I've loved the interaction and the various renditions created. Thanks for visiting! :-)
DeleteA beautifully woven combination 💜
ReplyDeleteThank you, Willow! I appreciate you stopping by. :-)
DeleteYvie… wonderful. I took a chance and adding mine (Selma) to your first part:
ReplyDeletebeacon of wonder
April full moon captivates
good fortune awaits
Ah! To have had this moment/
I’ll cherish it forever
Happy travels. Happy spring. Happy memories. Xoxo Selma
Wonderful, Selma! I do cherish those mindful moments where I can just be present and fascinated with nature. Thank you for the well wishes! :-)
DeleteI love your response, Yvette! So exciting yo have a cruise to look forward to :) xo
ReplyDeleteThank you! We are very much looking forward to our cruise! I appreciate you stopping by. :-)
DeleteYour poetry beautifully captures the essence of April, drawing me into a realm of mystery and adventure. It's like each line is an invitation to explore new horizons and embrace the magic of the season.
ReplyDeleteAw, thank you! I'm so happy you enjoyed my poetry. Thanks for visiting! :-)
DeleteHi Yvi, a lovely response. I love reading in wet rainy weather. Your cruise sounds fabulous. Robbie
ReplyDeleteThank you, Robbie! Rainy days are perfect for reading! I appreciate your visit. :-)
Deletebeacon of wonder
ReplyDeleteApril full moon captivates
good fortune awaits
at the Wakiku hotel
Honululu Hawaii
Sorry.Yvette..in a silly mood today:) !
Oh, yeah! There is always fun to be had in Honolulu! Thanks for participating! :-)
DeleteBeautiful, Yvi. I'm sure it is exhausting in the midst of all that angst. Take care, my friend. Hugs, Harmony 🤗💕😊
ReplyDeleteThank you, Harmony! I appreciate you visiting and sharing! :-)
Delete(Jules) Hard to believe that another school year is almost over! And with it our grands birthdays arrive within about a month of each other about two weeks either side of the summer solstice!
ReplyDeleteWe have a short weekend get away in July. And hopefully we'll be able to get some help planning for something late summer early autumn.
We might even take the train (just seats) to visit an older relative moving closer to family next month. We'll have to book at least one overnight and rent a car. Just too much to drive.
Stay calm and carry on. (((Hugs))) ~Jules
My parents are actually moving further away, which has us quite sad, but it's their decision, so I have to respect it. I hope you are able to enjoy your summer getaways, Jules! :-)
DeleteSo glad you were able to book the shore excursions via another agency. I look forward to hearing about your trip. Excellent poetry as well, Yvette. I'm always amazed at the number of different poetry styles.
ReplyDeleteIt's a lot of fun trying the various poetry styles. You should join us some time, Mark! :-)
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