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Friday, October 11, 2024

#TankaTuesday #Poetry Challenge - #Syllabic #poem #poetrycommunity #tankapuente #bestandworstmoments #chronicfatiguesyndrom #anxiety #holistichealing @YvetteMCalleiro

Hello, beautiful readers! Last week was the first week of our new #TankaTuesday challenges, but life was so busy that I did not have time to even check the site. So, I decided to write a poem for that challenge today. Poet and author Robbie Cheadle provided us with our first challenge. She encourage us to write a Tanka Puente, which consists of two tanka poems separated by a line in between. She chose the theme of best and worst moments.

One of the worst moments in my life was when I lived with active Chronic Fatigue Syndrome for eight years. At the time, doctors were just beginning to identify it, and it took my doctor a long time to not only diagnose me but try a treatment. Unfortunately, although his treatment began to bring back my energy, it created a debilitating anxiety disorder. I stopped the medicine and sought holistic healers. Thankfully, they have brought me peace and energy. A side benefit was discovering mindfulness, meditation, and emotional frequency tapping. I still have anxiety, but I manage it well. I feel healthy and whole today. So, here is my poem...

(courtesy of @K3IST on Pixabay)

Road to Health

constant lethargy
heaviness inhibits me
long search for answers
remedy experiments
meds create anxiety

~change your thoughts and you change your world~*

body, mind struggle
start holistic therapy
mindfulness brings peace
focus on inner healing
strength and energy return

* This quote is by Norman Vincent Peale.

Would you like to try writing a Tanka Puente? Check it out here.

6 comments:

  1. (Jules) I would call your verse a Reverse Tanka Puente because it ends on a positve note! Continue on your 'golden' path. I have taken some yoga classes. I think I need to do so more regularlly. Changing mindset can be hard - but I do try to stay on the positive side :)

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    1. I enjoy yoga. I just wish I had more time. Thanks for stopping by, Jules! :-)

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  2. Hi Yvette, I'm so glad you found a remedy. I only know fatigue from covid, and a few weeks is bad enough let alone eight years. Your poems are perfect with a hopeful ending. I still wish I received notifications for your blog, but I'm at a loss. If you think of anything, please let me know, and thanks for popping into my world. ❤️

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    1. I think I may have fixed it, Lauren. Can you try to subscribe now and see if it works? Thanks for always trying. :-)

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  3. Yvette, bless you. Are you ok after that terrible storm of the other day? Hope so I (selma) included you and loved ones in my prayers. Stay safe.
    Your Tanka Prose is excellent.
    I’m also touched by your share of how real this sickness was for you. So happy it’s under control now and that you’re happy and living fully. Bless you my friend. Stay sweet. Xo

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    1. Thank you, Selma! Thankfully, we were untouched by the two hurricanes. I will be happy when this hurricane season ends. Thanks for your well wishes! XOXO :-)

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